Because my head wasn't in this I've missed three rules:

When you own all communities in a colour group the fine on unimproved communities is double.
When you own both sorting comms the fine is 10x the roll of the dice, not 4.
When you own more than one common room the fine goes up!

As a result:
cinnleighis up 80pts
__megh is up 6pts
seaborne is down 112pts
nyreak is down 21pts
matchgirl42 is up 47pts

Purchases: matchgirl42 bought 20 memebrs for both hp_stillness and slytherinstill at a cost of 100pts

Play:
cinnleigh, you throw 4,6 and land on SUPERFINE 200pts. You passed Go however and received 200pts salary, so nothing happens.

__megh, you throw 3,1 and land on sortedchallenge. nyreak owns this, you cause drama by landing there and are fined 12pts.

seaborne, you throw 1,6 and land on cunningfolk. You own this so nothing happens.

nyreak, you throw 1,4 and land on hh_order. matchgirl42 owns this, you cause drama by landing there and are fined 40pts.

matchgirl42, you throw 3,5 and land on hh_officials. You own this so nothing happens.